Saturday, October 08, 2005

Chapter Three of Jessamyn

About halfway through Chapter Three of Jessamyn. Amazing how much I can throw out without changing the plot any.
And what does that say about the writing?

I have a bunch of out-takes from Anneka that I'm managing to fold in here and there. Plot bits.

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  1. {{And what does that say about the writing?}}

    Nothing.
    But it says loads about the rewriting.

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  2. When I finish the rewrite of Chapter Three -- and wouldn't it be nice if I did that today -- I will go bac and tot up the words in the old and new versions. I'll bet I'll end up lopping off 20%

    Jo

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