Though I'll get back to them in a week or so when I start plotting the JUSTINE manuscript . . . which used to be the ADRIAN manuscript in my head but is now Justine's story.
As to Forbidden Rose and all I wanted to accomplish . . .
it's either in there, or it's not.
This post-copyedit period is when I walk around muttering, "I could have made it really good if I had another month."
I'm probably fooling myself.