Ok. Chapters One and Two, which were 5000 good, middle-draft words, are out. They don't land us in the middle of the action, which is where a story should start. They're too bloody contemplative.
So. Out they go.
No more rabbit scene.
I really loved that rabbit scene.
Blast.
Will you perhaps post the rabbit scene on the journal if it doesn't find a place in the book again?
ReplyDeleteHi Moth --
ReplyDeleteYes indeed. If the rabbit doesn't make it to the final draft
... and it looks right now like it won't ...
I will lovingly post it SOMEPLACE.
Aren't we lucky to have blogs to put out-takes in?