Thursday, May 29, 2008

Chapters One and Two

Ok. Chapters One and Two, which were 5000 good, middle-draft words, are out. They don't land us in the middle of the action, which is where a story should start. They're too bloody contemplative.

So. Out they go.

No more rabbit scene.
I really loved that rabbit scene.



  1. Will you perhaps post the rabbit scene on the journal if it doesn't find a place in the book again?

  2. Hi Moth --

    Yes indeed. If the rabbit doesn't make it to the final draft
    ... and it looks right now like it won't ...
    I will lovingly post it SOMEPLACE.

    Aren't we lucky to have blogs to put out-takes in?