I've been backtracking in Chapters five and six to fine-tune reactions and tighten prose. Sebastian's persona seems a bit squidgy. So hard to write male POV.
Or maybe I'm trying to write from plot, trying to drive Sebastian through actions he wouldn't take and into emotions he wouldn't have. Would he really confront Jess in that way, with that much sexual aggression, just then? Just there?
But even though I'm not pleased with the breakfast sequence .. I've left it aside and done some forward work into Chapter Ten. Just a thousand words or so.
Busy with holiday stuff too. Tra la.
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