tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15617001.post309393591436150544..comments2024-03-20T02:26:46.482-04:00Comments on Joanna Bourne: ANNEKA line edits doneJo Bournehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13457862962618886252noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15617001.post-10028775768256840002007-04-02T17:18:00.000-04:002007-04-02T17:18:00.000-04:00I feel wonderful finishing ANNEKA -- now named SPY...I feel wonderful finishing ANNEKA -- now named SPYMASTER'S LADY, of course. When I think of other folks readering it ... so scary and exciting. <BR/><BR/>I'm delighted all those line-edit changes seem to have solved the problems. I agonized over those changes.<BR/><BR/>Now I have to rewrite Chapters One to Three of JESS so the opening works better. <BR/><BR/>Hard. This is very hard. I'm kinda butting my head against a wall on this one.Jo Bournehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13457862962618886252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15617001.post-35734757035115431072007-04-02T16:21:00.000-04:002007-04-02T16:21:00.000-04:00Congratulations on finishing the line edits. It's ...Congratulations on finishing the line edits. It's really fun to watch your progress through all this. Is it still hard to believe it's happening?<BR/><BR/>Best of luck with JESS.<BR/><BR/>JulianneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15617001.post-28575527363361591592007-03-30T15:26:00.001-04:002007-03-30T15:26:00.001-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Jo Bournehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13457862962618886252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15617001.post-88439419473287190272007-03-30T15:26:00.000-04:002007-03-30T15:26:00.000-04:00I love 'Sebastian' as a name, but it's really too ...I love 'Sebastian' as a name, but it's really too similiar to 'Adrian'. <BR/><BR/>I will probably also change Kenyon. There are some other heroes in the field named 'Kenyon'. I think it was Jo Beverley or Mary Jo Putney. <BR/><BR/>JoBJo Bournehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13457862962618886252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15617001.post-77905323907977910742007-03-30T01:17:00.000-04:002007-03-30T01:17:00.000-04:00So Jo, why ya changing Sebastian's name? DianeSo Jo, why ya changing Sebastian's name? <BR/><BR/>DianeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02491542008627930102noreply@blogger.com